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The Protectors #3 - The Kra Strikes!
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The Protectors # 3 - The Kra Strikes!
Published by Low Fat Comics Inc. 2009-10-14
Concept, Written, character designs by : Andrew J. Robertson
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Time has passed, the battles of Protectors and Kra have been many over the last 2 years. The new recruits have done well under the leadership of the original Protectors led by Overseer Captain J'on Anrac. The Kra have been held at bay, but unknown to the Protectors, all of this had been a diversion from their true motives - a ship that has a weapon so powerful it can destroy a planet! The ship itself is literally a flying weapon. That has been their goal, and now it is finished. The Kra Overlord has overseen this endeavour, and now he is ready to strike!

The Kra Cruiser launches without fanfare and speeds off into the darkness of space. On board, the Kra Overlord paces in the bridge area. /This ship will be the final piece to eliminate the Protectors once and for all!/ he thinks to himself. On board, thousands of Kra soldiers are busy at their posts or walking the halls on duty. The ship is massive, 9000 metres in length, and its width is 4500 metres, the height is again 4500 metres. It houses a compliment of 200, 000 troops and is heavily armed with thousands of kralon torpdeos and thousands of laser-cannons capable of penetrating the toughest shielding. Its own shields are able to withstand an assault of almost an entire fleet. It houses the weapon that is capable of destroying a planet and it is a predator ready to strike whatever stands in its way. It is the Kra Overlord's battlecruiser, and it is the epitome of everything he stands for - domination! It soon reaches celerity level 5 on its way to decimate the Protector homeworld once and for all...

"No, no, no!" yells a frustrated J'on Anrac. He has been training Zaba Tos, recently promoted Captain, and she is not doing very well in her sword mastery instruction. "A Protector's natural abilities allow them to have control of their specialized fighting style, in this case the swordsmanship - but you are struggling to maintain absolute control. What is going on?" "Overseer Captain, I am distracted..." says Zaba."I could have told you that young one! Explain WHY?" Uncomfortable, she finally says, "J'on, I am sensing something that is throwing off my abilities." J'on stops and studies her, "What is it Zaba?" she concentrates harder but is unable to get a real focus, "Something ominent is heading towards us - but I don't know what." Knowing she has been trained to use her sensing ability, J'on suddenly puts his own laser swords away. "Enough training for today, let's get to command and see what they can tell us." The two make their way down to Protector command and ignoring the usual hails from the troops as he walks in because of his rank, J'on goes right up to the central detection panel where a nervous troop says, "Sir?" "Captain Tos has been sensing something disturbing, something threatening, coming our way, can our long range sensors pick up anything?" "One moment sir," says the troop, He activates the panel and makes some scans, he extends it out as far as it can go and says, "No sir. Nothing that even our longest range sensor can pick up." J'on looks at Zaba, she nervously looks at him. He looks back at the troop and says, "Keep your eyes open, if Captain Tos says something is coming... then something is coming and we need to be ready." "Yes sir, Overseer Captain." "My the Lord be with you trooper," J'on says as he and Zaba turn and leave the area.

Overlord, the Kra leader, is practicing his own deadly training. Hi huge laser broadsword cuts the air with dealy accuracy, finding its marks he has made. The remotes fall in a blaze of energy as he continues his attack. At 7'5" tall, it is an incredible sight to see such a huge individual make such fast and deadly attacks with such accuracy. Then again, he IS the leader of the Kra, he is Overlord! He has managed to master all forms of training from speed, fighting, intelligence, telepathy, telekinesis, skin resistence, healing factors, sight, and the ability to sense things beyond normal sensing for beings such as himself or the Protectors. The only other person who begins to come close to him is Overseer Captain J'on Anrac. His own fighting, speed, healing factor, and other sensing are close, but his sight, strenght, intelligence, skin resistence, telepathy, and telekinesis are not close - they are still in what would seem like training stages. How did Overlord manage to get so powerful? He has used science to alter his body to be extra receptive to the abilites mentioned, and it has granted him a near-limitless power.

(Please note: This will be a continuing story as I have time to add to it.)

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